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Galley Hill Primary School, Hemel Hempstead. Galley Hill rated GOOD by Ofsted. Value of the Month - PERSEVERANCE


Today you will be writing the ending of your historical story. 

Make sure that you check back to your planning, how do your characters escape? 

Take a look at the original ending - it describes the eruption in more detail and tells us how the characters are feeling and what actions they take.  You will need to include the same things in your ending.  I haven’t written one for today as I think your endings will all be quite different and wanted to let you be creative.  You always have the original story to refer to - I have put pictures below to help you. 


  • Read back through your story so far.
  • Read your planning.
  • Use the Wednesday word banks to help you.
  • Remember capital letters, . ! ? , “” punctuation
  • Add descriptive devices.
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