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Galley Hill Primary School, Hemel Hempstead. Galley Hill rated GOOD by Ofsted. Value of the Month - PERSEVERANCE


Good Morning!  Hopefully you have thought about your main character in detail (Monday), planned your story (Tuesday) and are ready to start writing your opening today.  (If you have missed a day, it would be better to go back and complete that day so that you are doing the learningin the right order.  Monday and Tuesday's sessions will make today much easier!)


I have done another video for you today to talk you through your learning.  I hope it helps! 

Only write your opening today.  Use your planner to help you and the word banks that are attached below.

Remember to check: capital letters (starts of sentences and names/places), end of sentence punctuation . ! ?, conjunctions - check out the Friday PPT to review the different kinds and how they are used if this is helpful, use of interesting descriptive devices (adjectives, adverbs of time, prepositions)


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